Deseription writing

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My monster is called Chazanaitor. He eats meat and drinks water and he has teeth sharp as knifes and his eyes are like fire balls. His tail is long and it has fur on it and his wings are like dragon wings it helps him fly because it helps his body get of the ground. his fur is blue as the sea and his muscles are strong as a metal and he is 6 metres in height and his claws are really sharp too.He likes to do flying and drawing and his language is growling and he has four ears. He has muscular arms and legs.
by Chaz

what did I learn: I learned that I can do writing very well.
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