Writing moderation

Chaz Rossiter

Year 5

Lc13

October 2010

I went tramping up a big steep hill I started climbing the hill I was sweating hard like the water in my face.

I nearly slipped off the tramping hill of tyres I got up the hill and I had to go down a rope.

As I was going down the rope I slipped, tumbled and fall rolling down the tramping hill.

I got to the bottom and I bounced like a kangaroo down to the next tramping hill and I started climbing it.

As I was going up and up and up until finally I got to the top and there was another rope I went down and I was going pretty fast I got to the bottom I finished the course YEYYYYYYY.