Sunday, July 31, 2011

My P.I

12 comments:

  1. niceP.I. you chose an intersting topic but u could of spoke clearer

    camryn luke ty tom

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  2. Great P.I Chaz!

    You had lots of info but next time you should let us read of the screen and speak clearer! But otherwise great!

    Alana! :)

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  3. we liked your PI because it had lots of info. Maybe next time you could have less information on one page and more pictures. Other wise, Nice :)
    -Hannah & Caitlin

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  4. Speak clearer next time and maybe write what is on the screen.Speak expressively and louder.

    Glad you got there in the end

    Bex Cindy Jaime

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  5. well done chaz
    what you need to do next time: speak louder and clearer and more pictures

    what you did well: You presented it well but apart about the fact that some of your work got deleted

    Linda Natalya

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  6. your p.i was a smasher. when you picked your topic you should be so exited when you picked your topic.

    you need to have more information and read faster with out stopping

    from Thor and Cam

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  7. lots of facts very interesting look at the audience.could have been longer next time awesome P.I Chaz


    Harry and Aidie

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  8. great p.i. chaz. next time you could have spoken with some expression. next time you could of spoken clearer. but it was a good amout of research.

    from josh sam fergie

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  9. Great work Chaz are you sure you didn't copy anything because at the start of a sentance it had[11] also you need to have more pictures but you spoke very clearly and we could understand you well!
    Sean,Annaleise and Aidan

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  10. We think you did well because you had lots of info, but next time dont copy and paste.

    Maddi and Ana

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  11. I'm really disappointed that you haven't done a PI up to the really high standards of all your other ones. I'm pleased to see you tried a different way of presenting, although I love all the books and posters you've done before. The information you included was not in your own words. We agreed last term that you had to start your investigation with a question and you weren't to read out what was written on powerpoint slides. Your reading was fluent, although some of the words weren't correct. Chaz, you need to do a really good investigation this term. Get started now.

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  12. NEXT TIME INVOVE THE CROWD BUT NICE FACTS GEART PI SAUL

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